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Old 04-13-04, 03:04 AM   #9
Afterword
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yo i liked both yall verses, they were pretty dope compared to some of the garbage i c

VC- u got much skillz, and i like yur style
but he definately got u on the structure point
it needs work, the fact that its a lil hard to follow takes away from the lyrical onslaught u displayed. try seperating yur lines and thoughts better, other than that a few fresher punches and u r there

chopa- to me you should have come harder with yur closer, and step up the vocab a lil b/c vc was on fire. but u came strong with good multies, punches, and great personals.

fav line:
"u can be sadien and still wont be hotter.......
i kno wat VC stand 4,the VICTUM of CHOPPER......"

i just call it how i c it
hit my battle and do the same
vote= choppa
peace
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