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God...I hate to do this...but I'm gonna anyway....My vote goes to Choppa City...

First, analysis (and then I'll explain why i hate to vote for him)

I've really got nothing too positive to say about VC's verse. I guess the vocab was a'ight if, by vocab, you mean knowing big words (but not knowing how to use them in a way that a) makes sense, b) flows or c) does ANY damage at all to an opponent). Having a large vocabulary is useless if you can't use it sparingly...Punches may be in there, but they're too convoluted and hard to find, they don't stand out much at all...

Choppa didn't have a whole lot of work to do, in my opinion, but let's look at it anyway. "shouldve neva put the 3-0 a ko cuz u a joke.......after this battle he aient even goin wanna say uppin 4 votes....." Good line, not great; I smiled a bit when I read it. "u can be sadien and still wont be hotter......i kno wat VC stand 4,the VICTUM of CHOPPER......" the punchline is clever, but I don't know WHAT the fuck you said in the setup line. "u jus been killed added 2 my KO list.......its like yo punches not connected,like fingers wit out a fist......" Again, clever...really like the punchline.

So, I'm giving it to Chopper...but let me say why I HATE to..."dont ever do outloud freestyle battles,when u cant even type right....." This line just irritates the shit out of me. First off, outloud freestyles would, obviously, have NOTHING to do with typing so the line doesn't make sense but, more importantly, if you're gonna talk shit about someone elses typing you oughta make sure yours is top-notch. I understand spitting fast and your fingers fucking up...but even in a freestyle, you can go back and fix mispellings and stupid fuckin' grammar. I'm just saying that, if I was battling for instance and was wearing some dorky fuckin' clothes, I'm not gonna talk shit about my opponents clothes cuz I'm just settin' myself up...and that's what the "typing" shit did. Just my two cents.

Regardless, Chopper gets the vote.

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