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Old 04-13-04, 03:59 AM   #11
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Its kind of perceptible who took this...here...I'll break it down so you know what I mean.....

VC-Sorry, but your structure just depleted your chance of taking this victory, your punches were very played out also, most of your lines I didn't even understand, dog, you were forcing MUCH too many lines in there.

Choppa City-Had a lot of personals, punches, and funny lines. Also had nice metaphors there, too(note the oprah line...lmao )

Punches-CC, had personals which really stood out, letting CC take this catergory.
Multies-I didn't really see ANY in both verses, so none.
Metaphors-VC didn't have any in his verse, CC had this funny ass metaphorical line, so CC takes this catergory.
Vocabulary-VC takes this because of his vocabulary part in his verse.
Flow/Structure-Haha, please don't even ask, CC takes this, VC's was just out of shape.
Humor/Creativity-CC, he had many funny lines that kept me cracking up.
Vote-Sorry CC, but VC took this....haha sike , CC took this win by alot, a blowout by CC.....

Oh and CC if you don't mind, try to peep my rhyme, Industry Diss
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