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Old 04-13-04, 04:23 AM   #8
Concrete
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Alright both of these emcees had basic rhymes...here I'll break it down..

Shady-Had bountiful multies, I won't doubt that, but they were mostly all forced, you also had a couple of punches in there, too.

CREAM-Had more intellectual lines, also had more wordplay punches.

Punches-CREAM, he had intelligent lines that really...'outsmarted' Shady.
Multies-Obviously Shady took this, he HAD ALOT of multies in his verse, so he takes this catergory.
Vocabulary-CREAM took this catergory, had more vocab, while Shady only concentrated on multies.
Metaphors-None, didn't spot any metas in any of the verses, maybe there was some, but I didn't see.
Flow/Structure-CREAM took this, Shady's flow and structure was all confusing and very hard to read.
Humor/Creativity-Shady, he made fun of Cream's name with creativity, so Shady takes this catergory.
Vote-Cream, he had punches and strucuture which really took the W.

Oh and if you have any time, try to peep my flow in Open Mic, Industry Diss
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