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Old 04-13-04, 01:28 PM   #1
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for streetsweepa:

flow:your definatly improving this was a whole level better then that verse against me you had still room to improve though 5/10

volcab:alright basic use you should work on this cause it can be a deciding factor in close battles 5/10

punches: again better then stuff i've read of yours you are improving your best line,"ur chances of beating me are the same of breaking a curse//" still the strength of the lines could be upped but good job 6/10

overall:16/30 this was a leap forward for you as in the quality of your verse not sure if it's enough to win yet though

breakdown for nolostrhymes:

flow:alright alittle off in the first few bars but it levels out nicely 6/10

volcab:good use pretty basic could improve this 6/10

punches:not too many that really hurt best line,"cus when this battles over ull b further underground than ya crew//" aside from that pretty played 6/10

overall:18/30 good verse

vote--nolost4rhymes gets my vote
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