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Old 04-13-04, 01:37 PM   #17
Krackmittens
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damn dirtyboy is always doing big ass break downs

street - i understand you are new so i wont be that harsh ok you really need to stay on point and not get lost in the moment and stretch words just to make them rhyme your flow is pretty basic same with the vocab and structure nothing that stuck out to me keep elevating
2/10

nolost- ok your flow was decent you made some of those lines run a lil long and that fucked up your structure vocab was basic no real hard punmches some decent multis
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