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Old 04-13-04, 03:14 PM   #12
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ok breakdown
opener - skillz..even thos it didnt rhyme...it was a harder hgitting punch...
flow - mc...felt ur flow more...skilz werk on ya flow and not stretchin ya lines..
punches - skillz...fasho his hit harder...mc u need to elevate in this category...
personals - skillz...u used sum hot personals....mc this category will help your punches...elevate here too...
wordplay - skillz...nice job in this category...
closer - skillz cuz his ish wasnt played....he also had a nice multi in it...
vote - skillz
mc elevate dogg...dont stick wit the elementary lines....ull get betta...no hate jus a vote
return the favor in my battle wit carson...HONEST VOTES ONLY....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119160
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