Alright Checckity Checcck!! ' ... (Get Off My Clit) You Vicious Pedestrian Dykes!! Lol

No Bull-Shit!!!

Check Example Kiid's Lines':

u must never heard of example the kid
u wear your fitted real low, i shoot 1 inch under the rim

^I Believe You Could Have Came Up With A Better Opener!! But It's Alright 6/10

i am a young nigga, surrounded by violence and lawness
u wont b lucky as kanya, ill leave u jawless

^Alright Line' .... But Wheres The Punch? 7/10

i only shoot til i c the white of the eyes
so u can hide your face behind the shaw,and get poped by the nine

^^Most Deff Your Best Line' ... Good Use Of Mutlie's.. There Is Some In There 9/10

dont fuck wit the kid or the whole gunfam
cuase this that little nigga that murda any grown man

^^Weak Closer!! But Good Enough To Get You My "Vote" ...!!

Some Advice You have Nice Structure & An Alright Flow' .. But Work On Your Punches Make Sure They Get Connected' ... And Evelate Playa' You Will Eventually Get Better Gradually' ...!!! (Peice Of Advice) Take It Or Leave It' .. Either Way !!!

A.K.A Checckkity Checck!! lol.. Some Of Your Lines Fell Off Short' !! And That Ran Your Whole Body Of Your Verse!! Structure Was Off... Flow Was Ok For Me!!' .. But Your Whole Verse Was Off Balance.. You Too Need To Evelate!!' ... EveryOne Starts At Some Point!!' .. (My Advice To You)

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