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Old 04-13-04, 07:49 PM   #19
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Alright Let Me Break This Shit down!!! No Bull-Shit!!


Check Carson's Lines:

This kid's 14!...He went ta rent LionKing an still got carded..
Born wit Failures....You had L.'s in your name before you even started

^ Very Nice Opener!!' ... With A Good Punch... 9/10

you see? If you wanna hold respect, dawg stick wit your topicals...
Cus stickin wit jet's like u makin vet..the shit's simply impossible...

^Again Droppin Decent Bars' .. With Good Punches' ... 10/10

LI or AI, drop 1 to the head an 4 in the mesh, just to stain ya dress...
Don't sweat....its jus the net...
You can alway's jus Hide ya Rec..an keep on claimin..."not to test"

^^Structure Fell Off Long' .. And that Fucked Up Your Flow/Verse!!! 8/10

OverAll It Was A Nice Verse I Enjoyed It' .. Work On Structre And Verse Though!!' ...(Advice To You)


Alright Check L.I.'s Lines:

Cocky attitude needs to be checked...cuz it has him losing respect....
Could have Sherlock Holmes detect...hed say u have a loss to expect..

^Great Opener' .. And Nice Multie In There Also!!! .. 10/10

Records 36-10 thats good and all...only have it cuz u take newbies to brawl...
My record next to yours looks small...But lets check your opponent recall...

^Nice Punchline' ...!! 9/10

L.I.'s career he be takin?....haha come on u must be mistaken...
Wit lines "wacker" than masterbation...suggest u stick to sig makin...

^Very Nice Closer' .... & Punchline With Good Use Of Multies In There' .. 10/10

OverAll' .. I Also Enjoyed Your Verse' .. And It Was Very Nice Structured & It Flowed & Went Together Nice!!!' ....!!

Vote: L.I.
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