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gkilla- ya started of strong, but you lost me so many times, you had 2 very nice punches, and not alot of meti's
this is the piece that caught my eye, nice punches
"you couldnt be 'americas most wanted' if you did a crime or tired//
your americas most wanted man to stop rymin and commit suicide//
your like weed and im just like the lighter dawg settin you on fire
How can you call yourself a gangsta when its Brittany you admire"
could of lost some filler, and kept it short and powerfull but still a good drop-6/10
Threatz-not much of anything in ya verse, mostly boasting, one punch that didnt
do much, think you could try focus more on punching and cut out filler,
but if you had to cut out the filler, you would have one line-
"you'll be da oppisite of Frosted Flakez cause you ain't dat great
you about as hard as Ricky Lake.."
this was to me a very weak punch, but the only one,1/10
Vote-Gkillaz05
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