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Old 04-13-04, 08:25 PM   #10
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Aye Yo.... The Break Down...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No Bull Shit'

Henchman Gets My Votes Also' ...!! Because... Mainly Insane' Your Shit Was "Basic" Flow Was Off.. Witch Threw Your Structure.. Off Witch Threw Your Verse Off... And It Was Basicall's .... Off Balance' .... !!! No Vocab Nor WordPlay' ...!! .. Punches Werent Connected!! But Aye Yo.. Enough Of That Shit!!

Check Henchman's Lines:

Insane Bestoed With Aerobics, Hope Is He Can Step-Up
You Want To Be A-Head? Look, I Just Want Your Neck-Cut

^An Alright Opener Could Have Came A Bit Harder' ....!! 8/10

-^No Wonder Its Hard-To-Stay, Ur Friends R Hard-To-Pay
Mommys The Cause 4 Insanity, & Y U Cry On Fathers Day!

^Line Is Fucked Up Fix It' .. lol ... 5/10

Nobody Really Likes U! Lame?-Past It Theres Insane-Static
Main-Faggit, Gay Flow & Look, U Only Gt 1 Straight-Jacket!

^Line Was Clean' ... & Liked The WordPlay 9/10

U Kiddin-Me? Rap 2u Is Still-A-Dream That U Can't-Play
So Go Click Cool Edit Pro, Eyes Closed n Pretend Ur Kanye, kid

^Best Line & Also Awsome Closer!! 10/10 .. I Like Your Style It's A Bit Like Mine!! .. Propz On That.. Well ProPah Verse!! I Enjoyed It

Vote: Henchman
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