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Old 04-13-04, 08:50 PM   #14
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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StreetSweepa: 4/10
You Need To Elevate. I've Said This In All Your Battles But It Seems Like You Never Take The Time To Learn. Your Punches Are Wack Because The Word Usuage Is Fucked. Mulits and Metaphors Would Help Your Verse Out A Lot. Nice Flow, Just Work On Dat Shit. Newayz, Elevate and Stay Dope.

NoLost4Rhymes: 6/10
Nice Drop, Simple and Sweet. Punches Weren't Really Hard Felt But They Were Enough. Not Really Many Mulits and Meta's but It Atleast Had Sum. Flow Was Alright, But Structure Was Off. Newayz, Elevate and Stay Dope.

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