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Old 04-14-04, 01:21 AM   #15
PoLiFicK
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i agree wit triple n both of yall came real strong
oc6-u had some real good shit i liked yo flow homie u had some good vocab some good struture and good punches

worstline-You burn the innocent? We'll I burn the fuckin' guilty/
And your guilty of losing this battle, voted by the Frontline Emcees/

wont feelin dat ^^^^^

bestline-
And I'll have ya running up and down helpless, just like ya avatar/
^^^ did dat rhyme wit stirred???

spit- descent verse not all dat but it was descent u also had good structure vocab and punches

bestline-im tha king an u peasent of dis rap game\\
i won't stop at nuttin to finish u off,cut chu neck an rip out cha brain\\

wostline-im real violent when i start my method of physical dismantle\\
want a demonstration come hurr bring legg imma gently rib it off by my manhandle\\

some of yo sentences was longer than the otha u need 2 even it out but all in out love yo flow 2 be new

oc6
punches-7/10
struture-8/10
vocab-7/10
flow-7/10
start-8/10
ending-9/10
overall-9/10

spit-
punches-7/10
struture-8/10
vocab-7/10
flow-7/10
start-9/10
ending-8/10
overall-9/10

imma base this on how many personals and spit won personals since yall tied in overall so vote to spit
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