your rappin is horrible, worst i've ever heard..
you want feedback? your style is absurd...

i don't even need to rhyme to beat you
my first couplet was all i needed to defeat you

notice i said you needed 10-30 bars
you had 5...thats 25 short..ya i like cars

see you lose cause you ignored the rules
left yourself lookin like a 35 year old illiterate fool

these are my last two bars i hope you liked my rhyme
think about killin yourself, suicide isn't a crime

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