okay wild fire, that verse was pretty hot, good punchlines and decent personals a few quotables in your verse

spitfire, i liked your verse too, you had good punches and flow decent structure and okay metaphores

i think wild fires structrure was better
i think wild fires punchlines were better
i think wild fires metaphors was better
i think spit fires imagery was better
i think spit fires flow was much better'

wild your verse seemed to forced, but you got my vote