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Old 04-14-04, 10:33 AM   #12
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imma come out this fuckin corner swingin/
you got one second to live you can hear the angles singin
Ehh... not a good opener
shoot up ya house smash the family picture/
a shot bounces and suddenly hits ya/
goes into you like it was made to fit ya/
live life good cuz you have no future
last line didn't rhyme...
you say you a gansta g duce cant shoot/
take ya loot like a fuckin jumped prostitue
Boring...
imma teach you a lesson so sit and learn/
my rhyms so hot leave you wit third degree burns
Played....
you anit nutin but a dude witta clit/
and you aint shit wit out the mutha fuckin R.I.P/
now the chryme sindacate runs this bitch/
go ahead and post cuz im finished
I know we run this bitch....lol...... not a good closer though


Game Ruling, I’m pulling “MADD” rhymes out my “HAT”
Yous a wansta, copy and pasting lines for a rap.
Not a bad personal...
It’s a rap, cause this fakeass MC needs to take off his wig
I’ll Make his losing streak almost as big as this nigga’s sig (Damn)
LMFAO.......... that was some funny shit
Added a “d” to add flare to his name, That’s pimp Playa (sarcastic)
You miss spelled the rest too, it supposed to be “Mad Hater”
Good personal....
I blow off hips, and sneak in why you searching for hide out
I closed the R.I.P. cause this nigga wanted to post his tryout. (Ouch)
Good punch........ kinda feedin
He uses cuss words to help fill in gaps in his prewrites
I’ll K.O. his bitch ass, while he looking for “stars” and strips.
Not really a good closer.....


Overall this was an unfair battle. G Duece clearly has more experience and it showed. Madd Hatter just needs to work on personalizing his battle. G could use some more wordplay but what he had hit hard as shit. that's why I gotta vote for him.

Vote - G Duece
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