Lokie: You had some nice flow but your punches weren't really hittin. Your personals were OK but you didn't really make them stand out. I liked your flow, it was easy to read. That was about all I liked. You need to use some more wordplay. I also noticed that you stole a line from the late, great biggie smalls. It worked for him, not for you.

Diablo: I liked your verse better. I actually smiled at a line or two. Personals were hittin but you could have used some better wordplay. Overall you had the better verse. Keep It Up!

Best line.......

Ok lokie you say that you spit a good verse
ive seen more lively things coming out the back of a herst
^ Diablo

Vote: Diablo

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