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aight bar by bar breakdown
Choppa-
yo bout 2 sinken him like da titanic and he cant dive 4 boats......
he got poll in his name but still got trouble gettin 5 votes......
u gotta get KOed twice 2 tell u wack,call denver wax,both of yall d/r a joke......
aight ..this was a weak opener could have ben better...
do some research b4 u call somebody out,cuz choppa bout 2 chop u....
somebody tell a moderator turn his record 2 0-2.............
aight hah i liked this line nice....
niggaz was laughing at yo spit vs carson jet u thoguht he was all education.....
fuck up dis white boy have him lookin like michale jackson in da making.......
lol a personal attempt not bad styll got my attention..this nigga think he smart talkin "ebonix"......
but yo rhymes cross eyed like stinky fingaz from onyx.......
cuz u shouldve never touch a mic if u cant get 5 votes online......
haha not bad stayin steady...
killin u softly cuz u bout 2 disappear like lauren hill.....
then go 2 back 2 goldmic.com and come back when u get some skills......
aight its a pretty good closer..

aight now Jpoll-

Haha, a wanabe da band bitch...choppa city
Stealing his names,and his lines? Mr. F One Fitty
Aight not bad opener.
It's funny you bite wack shit, but where's yo teeth
Your profiles a black kid, but you rhyme like screech
aight not gettin this one?!...first line was aight..
JPolls prediction...your whole shit is fiction
You probably say you'll "clap" my whole depiction
startin to go downhill here...
It's real late here, so mofo i'm in a hurry
But i'll KO your ass still bitch....don't worry
ok this is aight...
And get this out your face, like your boyfriends gland
Your even weaker than chopper, you couldn't even "MAKE THE BAND"
ok the second line had potential but you just thrw it away!..

aight my votes for chop because he just had more wordplay with his vote and just went nice and stayed around topic and kpt a punch comin that hit...
Jpooll you need to werk on ya vocab and werdplay and elevate not hatin aight peace