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Old 04-14-04, 02:47 PM   #6
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for franchize

flow-alright basic nothing too clever but good job 6/10

volcab-in spots it was really on but for most of it like at the start and the end it was lacking 6/10

punches-a few alright punches nothing great but my fav,"my flow is rated ten star whilst u about as clever as a skinny kid on a diet//" mostly played topic though 6/10

overall-18/30 well rounded verse but with room to improve

breakdown for shadows edge-

flow-straight no off spots good job 7/10

volcab-basic here i think the only real spot where you lack to your oppenent 5/10

punches-nice lines some alittle played but overall you out punched your oppenent best line,"Only punch you ever stomached was Hi-C fruity" 7/10

overall-19/30 good job still room to upgrade though

vote--shadows edge
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league