Jay... your verse was pretty week. I've seen you do much better. The rhyming was pretty simple, wasn't all too original, there was one personal that was ok, but the rest wasn't all that great. But still... adamanto.. man your lines are too short, half the shit ain't really a punch and the whole thing is just like a generic pre write. Try to get original, get creative with rhymes, use personals, etc.

v/ Jay.

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