Aight, its like this. Both of you guys need to check your structure and flow. baller, some of your lines are short enough that you might as well just combine two or three of them into one, and that way you can also have more coherent punches. those 3 word ones don't quite do it. its like you got good ideas for them (like him takings an hour to post a verse), but you can't get in paper. elevate a bit.

norhymes, your structure also a bit fucked. the lines are stretched out in some places, and too different from one to the next, especially when you got no multis. good rhyme though, with mutlisyllabic words, pretty creative with your punches. jsut work on your structure and flow.

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