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From: ☆•°•☆яαρvεяεѕε☆•°•☆ |
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Aye Yo Check This Shit!!!!
Check Limited Edition's Lines:
Killa...you wouldn't have such a hard life, if you were the least bit serious
Your more fake than breast implants...wit a brain, shit...just as delerious
^Nice Opener' ... And A Nice Punch That Got Connected!!' Could Have Improved It A Bit' With Some Multies In There' ...!! 9/10
But you may turn around...say that I am a Eminem wannabe like others...
But even if you were as dope as me...ain' nobody would be your brothers
^Alright BarLine' .. But Wheres The Punch?? 7/10
This battle is finished...with the first bar I have taken you out...
The number of your wins canbe like your occupation...
^Weak Closer' ...!! Don't Even Rhyme!!!! 5/10
You Had An "Alright Verse" ...
Peice Of Advice To You- Work On Your PunchLines, Verse, WordPlay, Vocab, & Creativity They All Could Use Some Work' .. But Good Enough To Cast You My Vote!!!!
Vote: Limited Edition!!!
Killakb My (Advice To You) ... - - - Work On Structure, Punches, Multies, Metas, WordPlay, VOcab, Verse, Flow, Creativity, & Evelate Kiid' ...!!!
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