i liked both verses both of yalls flow was off the chain 4 reel

spul-had good struture,good multis,good vocab and some hott punches 2 match...yo flow was crazy man was feelin it 4reel...u had a good start which i always look 4 when i vote and u impressed me wit urz..

best line-You go around reppin’ L. Crooks… what kind of crew is that?
The “L” is for losers, cuz they are full of n*ggas that can’t rap

dat was ^^^ crazy ass helll nice shit homie nice vocabn and using his crew name against him

worstline-u didnt have 1 at all yo shit had me sayin oh shit datw as tight i didnt stop 2 think about wat u meant on none of it

line that caught my eye-I f**k yo family up... and I don’t even need to ask you
I did yo aunt last night… I guess that makes you my nephew

good way 2 end yo verse nice job

punches-9/10
struture-9/10
vocab-8/10
multies-8/10
personals-9.5/10
opening-10/10 loved it
closing-9/10
disses-9/10
overall-9.6/10


J-didnt have good structure but it was where i can read it u aslo used good vocab and had some tight punches but yo structure still was da worry....yo start got me 2 like i said if u start good dat can help and u did dat jus like spul so u get thumbs up on dat

bestline-

Spul, ya dull nigga, I come on cuttin in deep wit a sharp blade/
Only thing I could trade tha remains in for is shit, ya bitch-made//

^^^ 1st impression da best yo start was good

worsteline-u didnt have 1 like spul both of yall had some nice shit yo flow was on point

caught my eye line-Trick, get off tha subject of dick cause ya ain't got one, I'll beat ya critical wit a brick/
Stick to this, you want Rick to stick his dick in ya ass, crew:in one, u ain't in a clique//
All you bout

^^ real good shit that caught my eye

punches-9/10
struture-7/10
vocab-9/10
multies-7.5/10
personals-10/10
opening-10/10 nice
closing-10/10
disses-8/10
overall-9/10

winner-spul by structure J if u wouldve structured better then u wouldve had it rapped up but spul had flow and struture and hott shitt no hate J u did yo thing 2 but vote 2 spul