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Old 04-14-04, 06:27 PM   #5
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Alright AfterWord.. You Had Me Lost In Some Of Your Bars/Lines ....! I Wasnt Really Quite Fallowing Your Verse Was Off-Balance' .. The Structure Was Off' .. Wich Practically Threw Your Whole Verse Off' .. Individually Speaking You Had.. Some Good Punches Though!!' I Give That To You!!' ... Alright Look

Break Down...

Check AfterWords Lines:'

i may just jack-son, like im Samuel on dat Shaft-shit///
i flow with a pas-sion, and it will get-drastic,
as my airborne gasses make ya whole Class-Sick////

^Ver Nice WordPlay And ... Nice Punches' ...


so dude, take them $$ out of ya name,
u are no-where near being close to Ma$on Betha/////
so just let-us( lettuce) trend settas, rejoice and relish(2x), in our victory, and you'll never catch-up( ketchup), b/c u rhyme so pitifully/////

^^But What The Fuck' Got To Keep It Basic...!!!



on the real yur not supreme, yur just suffering,
from multiple delusional episodes//
i kick exceptional concepts ya know,
while u flow like Money Mike( Next Friday) got a hold of ya testicles!

^Again Keep It Basic...!!

But I Went With $$UPREME On This Shit Just Because Basically He Had The Better Flow, Structure, Verse, And His Shit Was Easier To Follow' .. Rather Then.. Like Going On An Easter Egg Hunt.. Looking For!! "AfterWords' Verse And Shit" It Was All Over The Place

Vote: $$UPREME
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