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Old 04-14-04, 07:25 PM   #5
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Punches: Pretty even, I guess. Pretty good personals by guyver, not much in that regards by Wildfire, but Wildfire came more consistently, like guyver what was up with the T-Rex line??

Flow: Wildfire. Other than the "shitting on you.. hitting on you" line you flowed pretty well. guyver, gotta work on that, especially at the end. both y'all gotta add some multis though, with lines that long, and maybe vary it up or something to improve your flow.

Creativity/Vocab: Tie again. All the rhymes were pretty basic for the most part, neither verse was crazy creative, Wildfire did have that long mock quotation from guyver though, so I guess some props for that.

A line like this:

"think ya bad like dennis tha mennace, instead u jus desperate like dan/" would be good and original, but I have no idea who the fuck "dan" is.. so it does nothing for me. gotta strike a balance between what people can understand, and what they haven't heard before.

v/ wildfire, but pretty tight.

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