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Old 04-14-04, 10:24 PM   #9
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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$$$tim$$$: 3/10
I Dunno What You Were Spitting, But Your Structure Was Horrible. You Were Doing More Of A Topical Than A Battle. No Punches In Your Whole Spit. Flow Was Off....and Since No Punches That Means No Meta's and Multis. Just Elevate and Remember When Battling Use "Battling" Structure and USE PUNCHES!! Just Elevate Pimpin.

StreetSweepa: 5/10
Your Flow Was Nice, Definitly Towards The End. Not Really and Metaphors and Multiples But Atleast You Had Punches. Sum Definitly Hit Hard While Sum Didn't. Just Elevate On Word Usuage and Metaphors. Creativity Also Helps. Just Elevate and Stay Dope.

Vote - StreetSweepa

*Best Line*

u talk shit but ur wak ill teach u some respect//
we all kno ur punches are soft and dont take effect//

^Syck Flow and Punch^