yo hot shyt
VC dude u got lyrics( i heard from u b4), but i dont think battles are yur strong point.
no lie i have the same problem making the adjustments b/c im truly a lyricist opposed to a battle, or gangsta emcee
maybe try concentrating some of yur lines and to make them more compact to enhance the impact, and also consentrate on tur opponent more

no lost u did yo thang a lil bit and i give u the win for yur consistent punchlines and similies. also structure and rhyme scheme were in tact

fav line: "I don't come close to losers, so I prefer you keep your distance//
you need assistance, better start praying and hope that Jesus listens//"

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271