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Old 04-15-04, 03:15 AM   #1
JPoll
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alright here it is the vote goes to wildfire.....should there even have to be an explanation....NO....he ripped him and i can tell he didn't even try....

he rhymes flow and personals were all tight....

he's had better....but the other kid wasn't very good

I've read him have better shit, but it was still tigyour rappin is horrible, worst i've ever heard..
you want feedback? your style is absurd...

i don't even need to rhyme to beat you
my first couplet was all i needed to defeat you

notice i said you needed 10-30 bars
you had 5...thats 25 short..ya i like cars

see you lose cause you ignored the rules
left yourself lookin like a 35 year old illiterate fool

these are my last two bars i hope you liked my rhyme
think about killin yourself, suicide isn't a crimeht read it