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		alright here it is the vote goes to wildfire.....should there even have to be an explanation....NO....he ripped him and i can tell he didn't even try.... 
 
he rhymes flow and personals were all tight.... 
 
he's had better....but the other kid wasn't very good 
 
I've read him have better shit, but it was still tigyour rappin is horrible, worst i've ever heard.. 
you want feedback? your style is absurd... 
 
i don't even need to rhyme to beat you 
my first couplet was all i needed to defeat you 
 
notice i said you needed 10-30 bars 
you had 5...thats 25 short..ya i like cars 
 
see you lose cause you ignored the rules 
left yourself lookin like a 35 year old illiterate fool 
 
these are my last two bars i hope you liked my rhyme 
think about killin yourself, suicide isn't a crimeht read it 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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