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Old 04-15-04, 04:01 AM   #9
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honestly, this is the only line i liked


Not even a vote, come on Mr. Milli Vanilli,.............thats a pretty good diss...but i wasn't feelin the rest of the verse...you really need to add some substance to your personals, punchlines..everything...

and as far as for this other dude....your verse was horrible. your structure was the ONLY good part about your verse,...and your verse was so bad it made your structuyre look bad too....so fuck it...you awarded no points..and we are all now stupider from readin your verse.....my vote jpoll
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