^ Oh yeah great feedback!!

Man that shit was ill i mean nice multies n the way you worded everything was inch-perfect. As you admitted flow was all over the place but that didnt matter to me.

Favorite lines

I'm breakin barriers like mach 5 air craft carriers
^ great opener

that shits hypocratical I'll leave your condition critical
from exposin the difference between whats right and whats "biblical"
^ lovin the multies

wheres the relevance? we got animals rights abusin elephants, you call it elequonce? i call it ignorance
^ very nice

everything is a double negative while opposites attract now tell me whats the difference? A rapist for a priest justfies his sins by abortin less than infants
^ very nice probably my favorite line in the verse

honestly, my honesty is subtracted from reality
who's to say what the difference is between strange and normality
^ illness

overall i'd give this 8/10

Peace
-TiK-