Nod goes to JPoll...
JPoll:
Y-N-G-Nizzie
Reading that punk ass name kinda made me dizzy,
The punch is kinda silly and weak, but at least it's personal...
He’s been on this site , since Jan,
OH what, still hasn’t got one single fan,
Decent punch, still personal..
Not even a vote, come on Mr. Milli Vanilli,
Not everyone can make these rhymes so illy,
LOL...nice setup...the punch was weaker on this though...
He cries when it takes me more than a minute,
Listen kid there is 5 battle losing streak limit,
HAHAHAHA...Good punch....
Well nizzie, fuck that name sounds asian,
So that means your poor, and probably live in a days inn.
Uh....whatever....
With a record like 0 and 2, you gotta elevate….
Well until you get to my level all you can do is appreciate.
Good closing, personal and nice punch.
Overall: Good flow, decent punches and pretty consistently personal; nice verse. Not sure about the "asian means your poor" shit (not sure about the psychology behind nor about the sociological reality of the statement), but that not withstanding, nice verse. Got some room to elevate a little, but obviously not a totally wack emcee.
YNGNizzie:
i dont know why u think ur rhymes are so cold//
i spit hot shit leavin ur body dizzy like u had an overdose//
body burnt like some over cooked toast//
Wack rhyme...not saying much, not personal...plus, three rhymes tends to sound awkard while flowing...
u still will never be as hot as me//
even if i set flames to ur body causin a tragedy//
Decent punch, a multi thrown in...
ur mom wouldn't be mad //
Dunno WTF this line is for...if you'd dropped "mad at me" it would've rhymed...but you didn't...so it didn't... 
she be thankin me by givin me head after i knock out her teeth//
Ummm...think we can get back to a rhyme scheme? Again, had you typed "mad at me" in the line above, this line would've sorta/kinda rhymed...
u can tell me im cold at this //
im not a fag but u on my nuts like flys on shit//
but ur
Hmmm...wack closer, pretty played out using a phrase that was cliche when the word cliche was still new...Dunno if the "but ur" at the bottom was supposed to be the start of more rhyming or what...:;shrug::
Overall: Really didn't say much..flowed okay until the line stopped rhyming...but mostly, in my opinion, filler. Work on stronger punches, hitting a more personal note and avoiding played/cliched shit...
Nod to JPoll...