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JPoll:

THE TRUTH? No it's lies, I've got documented proof,
The AI of rapping? NO, you're just phony ass spoof,

LOL...decent opener, personalized....

I'm straight off the bush, you're just a wrotten fruit,
N I'm slamming your spit, like I was Babe Ruth,

I smiled at the punchline, which doesn't happen much...nice...

You don't know English, cause you're straight off the boat,
You rap like Britney Spears sings, always off note,

hahaha...nice punch again...

Your polygraph test came in and you failed,
Truth, when you read my verse I won't be surprised if you bailed,

Good closer, back to the personal-name attack.

Overall: Short, sweet...flows well...not super personal, not super strong punchlines, but aboveaverage. nice.
Truth:

I would say fuk this wack kidd but he might take it as a serious STATEMENT/!1
His shakin’ ankles achin’ cos I be breakin', leavin’ him foot loose like Kevin BACON/!2

Good punch, but it doesn't really rhyme with the first line...I guess you could spit it, flip the pronunciation a little and MAKE it work...

My toxic toxin’s got yu droppin’ in my gothic topics which have yu tossed in while hoppin’ in a coffin/!3

Good multis but...didn't say a whole lot...flowed well though...

often I'll punch ya optic so far into the socket, no need for friends, cos yur own back yu’ll be watchin’/!4

LOL! That's good shit...I like the punch...little awkward with the wording, but came nice nonetheless...

Get battered an’ bruised left without a clue, this pussy gets left shattered an’ loose/!5
yu could be a rhymin’ Oprah , but my game's still phatter than yu/!6

Again...good punch...the setup is a'ight, didn't shake the Earth for me...

I Didn't Even Try When I Wrote This Sh%t, So I Don't Care If Yu're Not Feelin’ Me/!7
its appealin’ j poll but Its Like I Got DIARHEA The Way I'm takin’ this sh%t easily/!8

Played closer..diarehea & talking/dropping/spitting shit is waaaay played.

Overall: A little weird in places flow-wise but, other than those spots, flows nice and makes good use of multis. Got some clever punches, some defiente potential..

This one was a tough call for me...prolly the toughest I've voted on yet...but, I go with punches first and foremost and Truth got ya there this time J...nod to J