like lightning i strike givin you the five knuckle shuffle to leave u unsteady//
then wiv my clawed hand i silently creep into ure dreams to slaughter u like my name is freddy//

i drop bombs like a terrorist creating quakes that go off the richter scale//
i leave u bringin up chunks just like stifler after a taste of the pale ale//

i think these line killed it. franchise ya flow was kinda off but u had much better vocab, punches hit a lil harder.

edge had a good line tho:

Yo quit the lies, you only work for one franchise
You know the one that sells big macs n fries

a sick opener i liked that.

very close battle: franchise

return the favour pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119203
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119416

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