Solution came a lot more creative and had a better and smoother flow to me. I enjoyed his verse alot more too, it wasnt boring and held my interest. Nice verse overall man, u gots skillz like whoa..

spitfire your shit was wack, nothing really stood out, except maybe flow..structure you need to work on. Try and throw a little more creativity into the mix too..elevate man

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