retired.
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IP:
Sten: You had nice flow, but punches fell of pretty bad towards the end. The closer was decent, but your second and third bars were just pretty weak.
I Make Kids Flip-N-Bend,Dont Come With Simple Tens
Cuz When Sten. Contends,His Skills Triple_N's
^^ that's hot, nice word play, personal, everything. best bar of the battle.
triple n: nice multis, i see you elevating there, flow got better because of that. the problem is your punches. the first line was ok, 2-4 were just weak for me. i think you gotta use more setup lines so you can get some depths in those punches or something.. the way it is its just like 4 straight disses, and none are particularly great.
the dragon ball Z one was a pretty good personall, and your closer was ok. but man, that second to last line:
I'm too sick for you, doctors inject me into people as a vacination/
man that's weak. the second part has nothing to do with sten, so the set up is kinda wasted. also, people inject dead versions of disease or weak versions of disease as vaccination, so its like your saying your weak or something. i think that kinda killed the verse for me.
tight battle guys, especially for this few lines. really close, but for that nice openener by sten and for the wordplay i give sten the vote.
holler back on my battle v franchiZe.
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