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Old 04-15-04, 04:30 PM   #14
Shadows edge
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u betta wish dat u neva fucked wit me/
everytime u rap u think that ur the key/
this sucks
ur a guy, not a gurl/
when i hear u rap it makes me wanna hurl/
this sucks, no flow, and wtf kinda of punch is the first line?
everyone knos that u prolly a known slut/
so what do u plan to be when u grow up/
wow.. that second line.. sucked.
u prolly listen to dat Backstreet Boy shit/
everytime i hear that music it makes me sick/
ok.. generic diss and then a second line with no punch
u cant always be the best/
when i get done wit u , i'll put u to rest/
while im suckin on your momas breast/
generic diss.. meh
u thought u was kool til u met me/
i'll kick your ass so0o bad dat u wont be able to see/
so0o.. wtf. if you say it like that it fucks up the flow, which is terrible anyway, and the second line had nothing to do with the setup.
u prolly so0o poor dat u live in a box/
you'll have fun suckin my cock/
second line has nothing to do with the first, both are terrible punches
"Holy shit, u fell on a rake"/
"Ohh my god ur bleeding,im gonna throw u in the lake"/
this is terrible, wtf is with the quotation marks, they make no sense.
ur not a good MC/
u dont have anything to say against me/
fuck it im done, so0o suck my dick, i kno it'll be fun
weak as hell.

i don't know why you talk so much smack man, i give this verse a whopping 2 out of 100 just because its written in english.

Lyrically illustrate my bullets goin' through ya chest//
No need for animation, cartoons, or fake affects//
nice rhyme, pretty strong openener.

actually at this point, the battle is over. that one bar is better than the whole INC Killa verse.

vote, lil nae.
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