maku:...okay u had an interesting verse. u might not be a newb. but u need to work on structure and flow. u came with a lot of punchlines and thats good but they were not personal at all....i couldnt tell if this was written or freestyled. and no multies were involved. but your verse was good...jus need to work on your structure and dont have one line real short and the other one long ass hell.

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