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Old 04-15-04, 05:38 PM   #21
Cythis
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Ok now that is hard to decide…….

Nolost4rhymes-that intro was tight, you had control and didn’t fall off
But Lil nae2 that was also brilliant, great come back

Flow- something of what one wonders
All the way easy reader
Punches – you had very good punches – no advice
Personals- nicely done, formed perfectly…try punish his name a bit, cuz that’s the “strongest” Personal
And it helps voters to see that you didn’t pre-write
Mulies – Very good, every single bar was excellent( I qoute this one) good meti’s and Intro

Check the meti’s( I underlined)
Quick Spit your just a little bit illiterate and you got yourself into a perdicament...
Cause my freestyle is equivalent to at least on page of your written shit...You must have sensed your demise, so why would you provoke it?..
Hell yeah im scared, cause your gay as fuck and im homophobic

Vocab – this is one of the reasons why I think this battle is yours,
You have a very intimidating style, making you look more in charge
Some more funny’s will make you an all rounder + a very powerfull textee

THIS is what I mean by control(very mature)
“Your esophagus should be in a sublimal state to speak those preposterous topics..
your lines are incompetent with no signs of any bars containing logic”

all and all – 8/10
lil nae2-(the underdog)- after that terrible intro, i honestly thought that you sucked
but you came back very strong, brilliant outro

Flow- started of weak, but speeded up
Punches – there is one punch, you should rather avoid, I quote

This is honestly what I hate to see, its childish, and shows that your just filling space(Very Weak)
“nobody thinks you'll win kid, why do are you even tryin'?
people said you had skills? then they must've been lyin'”

Personals – you had a lot more, there was two that I liked………….(to me I see a very immature style, maybe your still young, but it could also have been him, all I can say is keep it up

Fav line in the whole battle-this includes great Meti’s(check the way he styled this one)
(Again I underlined)1,2..1,2……that’s fucken good
“your wordplay-is-lame, he's the gayest-of-dames
Nolost4rhymes, i just ruined my whole verse just by saying-your-name

vocab – very good as a said a bit undeveloped,

THIS is a fucken brilliant outro, if you had more punches and less filler, you would win
battling me, trust that this will be the last time,-cuz...
...yOuR veRSe goES uP aND dOwn mOre ThaN tHIS LiNe-dOEs

All and all – 6/10

I think a rematch will be interesting, I believe it was an equal battle
Maybe lil nae2is stronger, cuz he’s drop was very immature( 2 or 3 battles from him, should do the trick)

My vote: Nolost4rhymes

Sorry for the long vote, couldn’t help it, it’s hard too find an good battles…