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Old 04-15-04, 05:57 PM   #15
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aight well pretty good lines from both...

Supreme: i was feeling ur lines more
Punchlines and Personals were really strong especialy
Like Broken-pencils Your Having Trouble Getting Your Point Across*
Even Lead-mechanics Couldn't Fix The Solution Of You Not Getting A Loss*
Vocab and Structure
pretty complex voacb and good structure
and the flow aswell was extremly good

franchiZe: wasn't really feeling ur lines
Punchlines and Personals were pretty good but Supremes were better and thats what lost u the battle
Vocab and structure were your strogest points
and flow was ectremely well
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