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Old 04-15-04, 06:08 PM   #16
Truth_
Flyweight
 
Posts: 146
IP:

franchise next come shorter an try to word your lines shorter an put in some
multis in yal verses this goes to both but as this battle went i was feelin supremes
verse more it was more cmplex goos structure,flow nice some good punches
ur feelin me ok franchise try to make your verses shorter i with the less wordin
u can on your verses an punches i will make your verse better an better structure
an thats wat $$upreme had...aight battle thou...



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