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From: ☆•°•☆яαρvεяεѕε☆•°•☆ |
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IP:
Alright Checcckity Checck
Check Triple_N's Lines:
Your past is catchin' up on ya', for you thats scary/
Cuz u aint from killafornia, morelike the "house on the prarie"/
^Weak Opener - - - 6/10
Stop hidin' in da closet, you gay just face reality/
An ugly as fuck, u fucked a dog an she was arrested for beastiality/
^WTF? lol ..... (Thinkin)
U the type faggot bitch, that likes to get arrested at every month's last/
Just to paly dress up in jail, and get fucked in the ass/
^Good Punch.. 8/10
This guy jocks crazy cocks, I mean why would I lie/
I can't knock much props, for landin the lead in "queer eye"/
I'm blowin' up ya spot, cuz u not hot, stop tryin' to be 2pac/
If you fell off the grand canyon you still couldn't drop/
^Dropping Decent Bar's... And Good PunchLines' ..!! 10/10
Your whole verse was wack an unclear, an u mad cuz its u to blame/
Cuz if you had an erection u still couldn't properly aim/
^^ Lol' An Alright Closer!! 8/10
Checckity Check $$UPREME's Lines:
TRIPLE N DOESN'T DO NO DAMAGE WIT A PEN*
THIS PUSSY IS SOFTER THEN NUNS AFTER HE BATTLES HE ASK GOD 4 FORGIVENESS OF HIS SINS*
^^An Alright Opener Could Have Came A Bit Better!! 8/10
TRIPLE: STANDS FOR HIS 3 LOSSES "_" THAT STANDS FOR THE WINS HE
GOT UNDER HIS BELT*
THIS KID NEEDS HELP LIKE SLITING-YA-WRIST YOUR ONLY HURTING YO SELF*
^Ok Where's The Punchh? 6/10
YOU MUST THINK THE GAME HATES YOU... YOU'VE BEEN ON SINCE A YOUNG BUCK AND YOU STILL AINT GOT A VOTE*
BETTER CHANCE OF WINNING DA LOTTERY YA STYLE IS CUT-THROAT*
^Ok' ... Again Wheres The Punch?? 6/10
So You Like To Spit-all-the-time//
You Couldn't Hit-a-bar If You Were In Jail Trying To Take A Bite-outta-crime
^Nice Closer I Like That 10/10 ...
Over All Im Going To Have To Give This Shit To $$UPREME' .. Because.. I Enjoyed His Verse' .. And Didn't Stumble Over Any Of His Lines' ...!!! But Peice Of Advice.. Improve Your Structure... & Flow
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