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Old 04-15-04, 07:08 PM   #4
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check Dis...

Ghost: 4/10
Your Lines Were Weak and THe Punches Weren't Even Hard. Structure and Flow Was There But No Really Mulits or Metaphors. Just Elevate and Continue To Drop.

Killah: 6/10
You Had Sum Funny LInes, Espeically About The One With Ashanti's Side-Burns. Your Metaphors and Punches Were Nice, Flow Feel Off In Sum Places, But It Still Went Overwell. Just Elevate and Stay Dope.

Vote - Killah

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