aight... truth, I really liked your worldplay. stuff like the carmen electra line, that's tight. problem is, the punches were kinda lacking in your verse, thought that personal was real good. getting a good punch in there is more important than wordplay, this is a battle.

da solution.. first of all, cut the smilies out. now you had some good punches, like the watergun/slingshot thing, but your wordplay, vocab were all ementary and your punches weren't all that creative. so you gotta work on that.

tight battle, but i give it to da solution because punches kinda make it in a battle this tight.

vote back on my battle against franchiZe in my sig.

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