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Old 04-15-04, 08:11 PM   #7
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vice...you had good punches...but you DO need to open up your vocabulary...i think thats what sperated this battle...you both had good punches..not really any multies...decent imagery...decent structure...vice you didn't reallyt have any good metaphors....and ikeda did...so...my vote goes to ikeda...sorry vice...just elevatre a bit more
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