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IP:
Ok we'll this was not that much of a great battle
Mike - structure was ok, punchs ok had a played punch and I'lls how u it. Vocab was good wordplay was good nothing really amazed me ur punchs where creative tho enough to get them hitting at a decent rate.
ur played punch/s:
This is not a punk concert, but you get moshed-in-pits
^^every1 knows the mosh pits lines are all played
You wouldn't have anything cumming outta ya lips even if you masturbated
You must the Hamas leader on the mic cause you get lyrically-assassinated
^^altho u added some creativity to em all the cum stuff, and lyrically assassinated shit is all played
Beating me is one impossible mission that Tom Cruise couldn't even con-quer
You must be David cause I'll goliathlly stomp ya
^again another played punch why well by now most of us has heard something to o with david and goliath, and tom cruise, and mission impossible punchs have been played for ahwile now.
Kid step up in ur punchs add something hard hitting no1 has ever heard before. Structure was alright, but could improve. Do some hw on opponents, and gain the advantage with personals it's funny to hear them in battles, and most of the time they are BIG clinchers.
D-vice
ur punchs where weak. Vocab was childish. ur bettah then this I can see u hiding talent show it. ur not 14 are u? u know more then that incorperate w/e u can into a punch or a personal disses don't envolve using grade 3 words when every1 knows u can be creative with bigger words. The more meaning u bring to ur verse the better quality it is going to be, and thats all there is to it rap is all about the quality right now I don't see none in ur's
breakdown
creativity-mike (creative with punchs altho played)
wordplay-mike (d-vice's where alittle childish)
punchs-mike (altho played still enough to get my vote)
personals-neither
flow-d-vices
d-vice had better flow, but mikes punchs where harder, and more creative. Altho played abit they where still enough to get him the win both of u need to learn what a personal is.
vote-mike
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