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Old 04-15-04, 11:12 PM   #23
M&rk
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shadows edge take this, das sum good shit, but your finisher coulda been better if u said sumin bout food groups cuz dat fruit group was dumb and off set the good line before it. st8 up good shit tho real nice punches

other cat take notes on how he did dem punches. take everyday things and use wordplay makin 'em punchlines das dat ticket. hah. but gyeah do that

like these two by dat guy

Only punch you ever stomached was Hi-C fruity
Your punches couldn’t deliver if they was Dominoes

das how ya do it on here.

vote-shadow

yo dis my second battle i voted of your franchise hit up my battles
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