Beyond Comprehention
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IP:
Breakdown:
Punches: Neither
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Disaster
Flow: Disaster
Disses: Disaster
Overall-This Battle Was Different.I Didnt See Any Credible Puns If Any At All.Killah's Verse Was Too Choppy With The Flow.His Bars Were Too Long.Having Stretched Lines Makes Your Scripts Look Unorganized.When The Reader Is Going Over Your Verse,Having Stretched Lines Makes It Take Forever To Get To The End.By The Time You Do Reach The End Of The Sentence,You've Forgotten Which Lines Go Together.Plus It Takes Longer To Get To The Point Or For A Punch To Get Delivered,etc...A Lot Of Killah's Lines Were Weak & He Didnt Use Any Complexity Either.Disaster's Verse Was Based On Disses.She Used Them Better But Lacked With Puns.
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