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Old 04-16-04, 12:04 AM   #5
anxiety
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From: colorado
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Quote:
Originally Posted by white-ice
listen as i spit,coz wen i spit i cum raw/leave ur ass thinkin wot the fucks gone on yah?
wack opener, its a good idea to have a PUNCH
u think uz a jay-z/but without the pay G/
ur rapstyles la-zy/itd b quicker 2 page me/
wut? whack.
see i can bust a rhyme ,in twice quick tha time
so read between my lines, n u 2 my start 2 shine!
why dont u diss him instead of self glorify
but thats impossible/coz im 2 philosophical/
yet again^^^
but dnt let that stop u..hve a go/
ur not the only one ive cum across whos jst an average joe.
caliing him average has been the best punch u have thrown, wtf?
u see theres wit in wot i spit/n u 2z gona b gone like king kong,thinking u can stay up here...but ur wrong!!

wow, im not gonna say anymore

super ultra whack 1/10

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetsweepa
come on nigga u cant spit ur structure is weak//
ur punches dont connect, and my shit is elite//
better than his opener, but to be truthful, whack.
u call ur self white ice//
what the fuck kinda name is ICE?? atleast try to improvise!//
improvise?? wow! what a diss
u call me the average joe//
nigga u the one that rymes like a hoe//
how do hoes rhyme?
yea ur name is right, your whole rymescheme is frozen cold//
yea and ur rhymes old and week it might fold//
made fun of rhymes both times, second line killed it
where did u steal all theme rymes from a book?//
thats called plagerism u fuckin crook//
whack first line, his shit hardly rhymed
you might say your philosophical, ur punches are weak//
see this fucking win against u will be bitter sweet//
i didnt even have to try hard, cuz u brought the ice but i brought the HEAT//
ok closer


better verse, not good though 3/10