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Alright Guyver4mk' .. Your Shit Was To Basic For Me' .. I Wasnt Really Feeling Your Flow' !! Althrough It Did Have A Nice Structure & Verse' ..!! Nice...!!
Alright TREE Jay Nice Verse' I Enjoyed But.. Your Structure Was Fucked Up Witch Threw Your Verse Off-Balance!!
Checck TREE Jay's Lines Though:
First off, come at me, U wannabe G, talkin' about takin' it to the Streets,/
It's hard for me to C how you could take me, When U can't even handle the beats./
^An Alright Opener 7/10
Damn, ever realize as you spittin' that this shit's already a rap,/
That's he's just another generic emcee talkin' about makin' guns clap./
^Alright Punchline 8/10
And you just an undercard, Wanna be big, but Jay the Headliner,/
Now let me show you the way out the game, you can call me your path finder./
^And A Good' Not Great But Good' .... Closer 9/10
Good Enough To Take The Win!!
Vote: TREE JAY!!
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